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| joaniedark |
 Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 3:09 am Post subject: Joanie's Little Rainbow Notebook |
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I'll feature some of my writing around here...not everything, but an amount. My dA has most of my work (aside from some chapters of my in progress novels) so look there for more.
Okie Dokie, to start off, here's a poem I wrote in Textiles and break after reading all of LouisDelacroix's series Mein Fairytale This has NOTHING to do with it, but you can see where my state of mind was...*giggles*
Flowery Fields
Sunny days 'n sunny weather
Skipping through a field together
Lilacs, lilies, daisies grow
Through the quickly melting snow
Look at your lover, knees grow weak
Kiss 'im tender on the cheek
Watch now as the sky goes black
Painful like a heart attack
Once soft clouds begin to bleed
Go down on your knees and start to plead
May God take mercy on your soul
As hell's bells start to toll
He clings to your arm, with desperation
Scared by this demonic incarnation
What happened to a field so green
Happier than any ever seen?
No matter now, the end is near
No angels
seem to appear
No one comes to rescue you
The final moments for the two...
Amber eyes open slow
Looking at the world aglow
Soft and peaceful, beauty once more
Gazing up from a soft floor
Get up, look around and see
Lover once again with thee
Happy now, smiles so gay
"So you see, for all they say...
We were let in heaven anyway." |
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| Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 3:52 am Post subject: |
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Aww... I love that.
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| Meeko |
| Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 4:11 pm Post subject: |
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Nice! I'll try to read the ones in the DA account when possible but I really like this poem, very nicely constructed and gives you a nice imagery of what's going on x3 And it's touching...*wibbles a bit* Awesome work ^^
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| joaniedark |
| Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 10:44 am Post subject: |
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Thanks to both of you! ^_^ I earned wibbles, yay...
Here's an older poem, from quite a while back, when I was very sick and thought I was dying...(I'm still convinced I have a brain tumor)
Sickness
She withers
Her body falling
Like a dried husk
Useless
But somehow beautiful
Its beauty preserved
Though it is consumed by death.
She smiles,
Her eyes admiring
Like a proud mother
Accomplishments
Though numbering small,
They give her great pleasure
As they were simple and yet meaningful.
She fades,
Her life waning
Like a lightbulb starting to die
Dimming
And yet strangely bright
She passes to her afterlife
Shining for all she leaves behind.
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| Meeko |
| Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 2:29 pm Post subject: |
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It's so sad...the last moments and such...very nicely done however...also makes me wibble...and...you have a brain tumor...? =( Or they were thinking you had one at that point...?
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| joaniedark |
| Posted: Thu May 08, 2008 8:46 am Post subject: |
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| Posted: Thu May 08, 2008 11:47 am Post subject: |
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That could be many things at play there...but I dunno...until you go somewhere to get it checked out...the doubt stays there...=/ I do hope you figure out what it is soon...it could be quite a couple of things if those are the symptoms but it's best to check it and not jump to conclusions of it...I can only hope it's nothing too severe...=/
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| Violet Fox |
| Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 2:11 am Post subject: |
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She'll live for a while longer, I assure you. She's been well fed and kept in good spirits this last weekend. ^^
I loved the poems, by the way. Pleasingly dark while accompanied by a ray of hope. The story told in the first poem was wonderful. I can't wait to see what you post next. Kudos for great work!
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